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pros: VERY good Ideas. using Bowsers from different eras was a great idea.
The falling scene was also a good idea.
Basically you are creative with ideas so kudos to that.
The 3 bowser fight was awesome!
Cons: HOWEVER.... your execution was poor.I didnt see anything impressive. Although the falling scene was a good idea, I never got excited. the Music selection was not well thought out. I didnt have enough time to read the letter at the end. Not enough sound fx.
I can go on and on but I won't. I can tell you put alot of effort into this cuz of it's length and that you improve every time.
can't wait to see your future flash!