pros: VERY good Ideas. using Bowsers from different eras was a great idea.
The falling scene was also a good idea.
Basically you are creative with ideas so kudos to that.
The 3 bowser fight was awesome!
Cons: HOWEVER.... your execution was poor.I didnt see anything impressive. Although the falling scene was a good idea, I never got excited. the Music selection was not well thought out. I didnt have enough time to read the letter at the end. Not enough sound fx.
I can go on and on but I won't. I can tell you put alot of effort into this cuz of it's length and that you improve every time.
can't wait to see your future flash!
If you, or anyone else want to see the front page of the letter; watch Part 1, (this being part 3) where you can read it and it won't carry on until you press next; thanks for the review.
fat chicks need lovin' too!
I love SMBZ but this was hilarious lol.
I didnt really like it. I did not laugh the whole time and those jokes were plain and bland. Your jokes need to be deeper and not so obvious. I like your drawing style. It made both characters look like they belong in the same cartoon world so good job with that. Also, you must be sick of reading this, but the sound man! Put s creen b/w you and the mic to get rid of whatever is causing that noise or a better mic. And finally, I don't believe this deserved front page. Stick to the art, dont worry too much bout how u animate and just work on the rest n i bet your stuff will be great.
wow, dude... vierd ya?
nah, didnt think it was too great. sorry.
hellz yeah, boi. nice.
muy very funny amigo!
that's really funny dude
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